Wasnt a bad little flick, however a few things to comment one... One, I cant stand manda. But I respect it as an artistic style, just its not my cup of tea.
The dancing silohuettes, nice, but a bit overdone.
The car getting stomped on was a little meh-ful.
The guy at the end, well... Delete that now.
But it wasnt as bad as the last few cartoons ive looked at here... So I didnt give you a 0. You've got the starting of some skills, just not employable yet; Mac Monkey is the term; get some education under your belt then look for work.
Good onya tho :-)
Wow, that's gotta be one of the best flash animations i've seen in a long while... Definately a work of art this one, FBF never looked so good :-)
Go back, hire a designer to make the game more visually stimulating. Nobody wants to read all that sh!t at the start, nor do they want to stare at purple lines on a brown square.
However, the concept is quite interesting, and thats a good starting point for a good game....
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